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RAZ Story
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| ZA BlackAdder |
Posted on 02/02/2011 17:55:04
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good story
i liked that dyna was a zombie
u should make grim a zombe as well
btw u excel at grammar  |
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| FC_banana |
Posted on 02/03/2011 11:06:20
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Wanker

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woohooooo, rocket launcher!!!
yay ^^
~Beauty of Annihilation~
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| ZA Luna |
Posted on 02/03/2011 18:26:27
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the editor insidde me is screaming that you keep switching between past and present tense >.< but so far its interesting. please post the next one soon and not, like, 6 monthes from now
Edited by ZA Luna on 02/05/2011 14:06:33
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| ZA Wunder Rofl |
Posted on 02/04/2011 19:49:02
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you just had to make me the whining one......
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| ZA 2 |
Posted on 02/06/2011 09:06:57
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Numpty

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CHAPTER 3 FTW! Thanks for reminding me on Xfire Raz lol

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| RazNinjaMike |
Posted on 02/06/2011 14:27:51
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Added some more of chapter three. I changed it up A LOT from what i was originally going to do. Got a little bio history of Commander SlimJim, also got a pic of RazMike Base. More to be added soon.
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Yes i know i'm taking godlike forever with the posting of stories. Reason is because of the combination of school/work/gf/ personal life crap/ asshole people. Next chapter i won't post it in bits like i did with chapter three. When i'm done with it, it'll be posted all together. |
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| FC_banana |
Posted on 02/07/2011 02:44:02
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Wanker

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soooo, i need a gun fixed... ehmmm, i can has sniper?
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| RazNinjaMike |
Posted on 02/07/2011 12:26:54
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hmm |
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| ZA 2 |
Posted on 02/07/2011 21:38:27
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Numpty

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Noooess I ran out of ammo damn...
lol damn you... stopped too early this time!

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| RazNinjaMike |
Posted on 02/09/2011 11:43:34
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CHAPTER THREE.
Next chapter look cool And no it won't take me godfsaiasdddoisajdsidojgdfs ever to make the next one. |
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| FC_banana |
Posted on 02/09/2011 13:20:52
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Wanker

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hell yes, sniper!
i <3 u raz
now introduce cookie, the oldest fc leader, and 3rd member (after mel en enciada)
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| ZA Bvigil |
Posted on 02/10/2011 18:20:59
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sweet im the guy playing black ops
Edited by ZA Bvigil on 02/10/2011 18:34:42

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| FC Wings |
Posted on 02/11/2011 17:36:55
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cool! story dude getting better

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| RazNinjaMike |
Posted on 07/26/2011 18:27:07
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Part of Chapter 4 is up. Still changing rest of it. Had to retype whole thing since the file somehow got lost....and by lost i mean i threw the paper out that had the story accidently...And i know there still some grammar crap....dont bring it up please lol.......
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| ZA bagles |
Posted on 07/26/2011 18:36:15
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Cool story bro
<3 Carnage
~ŚøĽ~
[ZÅ~V]
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 07/26/2011 22:11:11
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ShawnPeezy

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WOW DEAD THREAD!!!!! LOL. Wow, so many mistakes. You fail at proofreading.
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| RazNinjaMike |
Posted on 07/26/2011 22:27:28
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Yup lol. i really only proof read once but i do it half ass. Most of the time is spent of rearranging events and alternating outline of whole story
btw nice deleting previous post XD |
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| Devase |
Posted on 07/27/2011 04:26:40
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seriously raz, how could you not include me? I was voting for your story idea and offering help and everything....


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| RazNinjaMike |
Posted on 07/27/2011 04:42:48
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Um anyone that in za is part of the story....I have my character outline of where everyone goes, you'll eventually show up.  |
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| Devase |
Posted on 07/27/2011 05:14:53
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I better. lol jk


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