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| ZA ChAr |
Posted on 05/16/2012 22:42:20
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awwww x doesnt like me... i'm not even in it 
but cool story bro 
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| Allie |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:15:49
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Wanker
Posts: 818
Joined: 23.10.11
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I'm so excited for whatever comes next!!!! I am always checking to see if you have written another chapter phoenix xD
I don't know why but I'm like super into this story :D Hopefully i get to take out some FC :P
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| Drkinferno |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:38:31
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y u no update? |
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| FC Wings |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:43:29
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Allie wrote:
Hopefully i get to take out some FC i doubt it O_o most of the FC snipers are better than phoenix ... im not even joking lol
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| ZA Luna |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:49:25
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I got a big blue star for posting. i must be special
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Slims on there side. All hells gonna break lose. and what about hobo? he was in za and fc for a while.
New chapter this weekend? please?
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| FC Wings |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:50:26
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ZA Luna wrote:
Slims on there side. All hells gonna break lose. and what about hobo? he was in za and fc for a while.
New chapter this weekend? please? he is our target practice and bait for the 2nd ZA war
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| ZA Luna |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:51:35
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FC Wings wrote:
ZA Luna wrote:
Slims on there side. All hells gonna break lose. and what about hobo? he was in za and fc for a while.
New chapter this weekend? please? he is our target practice and bait for the 2nd ZA war
bait for which side though? O.o we all want to shoot him at one point or another.
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| FC Wings |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:53:33
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ZA Luna wrote:
FC Wings wrote:
ZA Luna wrote:
Slims on there side. All hells gonna break lose. and what about hobo? he was in za and fc for a while.
New chapter this weekend? please? he is our target practice and bait for the 2nd ZA war
bait for which side though? O.o we all want to shoot him at one point or another. we just put him in the middle and let him go crazy with his wonders
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| ZA Luna |
Posted on 05/21/2012 22:55:36
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I got a big blue star for posting. i must be special
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FC Wings wrote:
ZA Luna wrote:
FC Wings wrote:
ZA Luna wrote:
Slims on there side. All hells gonna break lose. and what about hobo? he was in za and fc for a while.
New chapter this weekend? please? he is our target practice and bait for the 2nd ZA war
bait for which side though? O.o we all want to shoot him at one point or another. we just put him in the middle and let him go crazy with his wonders
Lol! put him out there with lem and shawn, and give them all shitty bots. Just to coax people to shoot.
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| Phoenix |
Posted on 07/04/2012 01:26:15
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ShawnPeezy
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Chapter 16
“Rockets inbound!!” Shouted Luna from the entryway of the blue base residing in Blood Gulch.
The Major General ran back deeper into the center of the base where the rest of her battalion lay. 4 rockets collided at the wall perpendicular to the entry way she was just in. They were the reinforcement unit. And reinforcements were called 20 minutes ago by Battalion Two. The commander of B2 was cut off before he could deliver the location to Luna, the B3 commander. She wondered what happened to her comrade. She was helpless and trapped within the blue base. The moment they battalion had moved out from the base, they were cut but rockets and sniper fire, forcing them back within the base. Luna looked at her squadron. Skyline and Junky didn’t make it during the retreat. Boxhead and Kitty were leaning against a wall wounded from the fall back as well. Luna, Code, Savior and Ulric were attempting to fight back at the enemy, darting in and out from the entryways. Little success. Voodoo and Ledapus, also lying against a wall within the base clutching their shoulders, were already injured from their contribution to take down the enemy. They did however determine that there were only two enemies. And that their location was along the cliff and cave just left of the base they were trapped in.
The FC’s were not moving forward however. While they clearly out skilled the ZAs, they were outnumbered still. They were out of grenades from the initial ambush. Invading was not their intention however. In fact, killing was not either. Prevent reinforcements and kill only when needed were the orders given to Coyote and Nugget. Their leaders were still going to need test subjects. Another reason for the war. They scoffed at the petty attempts of fighting back from some of the ZAs, fighting the urge to simply pick them off.
Luna knew they would have to run out of ammunition eventually. They were only a 2 man team. They wouldn’t have carried too much on them. The best she could hope for was her team could wear them down and eventually run to aid their clansmen. If there was anyone left to help.
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“THROW THE FRAGS BACK!!” screamed EZRab, following the orders he just gave. His clansmen barely able to return the rest as the grenades exploded in the air.
Bagels, the B2 commander was down. The last series of grenades that the battalion was showered by took out the commander’s left arm and leg. He was barely clingy to life. Drk was giving the veteran all the medical aid he knew. Luckily, it was enough to keep him breathing. EZRab took up command in his place.
The team was cornered back against the very hill that the five man squad held their own against hoards of zombies. Only the undead was not the enemy; it was Banana and Slimjim. Although the ZAs had the upper ground, they were constantly bombarded with grenades, sniper fire, and the occasional rocket. The Brigadier General leaned against the rock at the top of the hill and looked back at his rattled team. Every single one of them was trying to get a shot off. Prone, crouched, behind the few rocks that were on the hill, his team was not going to go down easily. Cnet and Freeze managed to push the FC’s back into the red base of Blood Gulch.
B3 should have arrived already. Where are they… thought EZRab, reading his assault rifle. He won’t make it if we can’t get him transported back to MainOps…
The new commander joined his team and fired at the red base hoping his bullets would find a target.
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The center was an entirely different story. B1 was sent to confront the enemy head on. Carnage’s unit was ducking in and out of hills throwing grenades and firing their rifles, each time hoping they wouldn’t lose their head. The Commander, was currently in contact with the commander of the Commando Squadron, Black Adder.
The CIC’s squad was in the shadows just right of the red base. They were attempting to give aid to both B1 and B2 by providing another line of fire the enemy would have to watch for. Tulip’s reticule found an enemy Spartan behind the hill in front of red base, firing 2 rounds from his sniper rifle across the landscape. The scream of a comrade came over her com right after. Just as she was about to pull her trigger, the enemy in her sight snapped strait to her. She heard a wiz and the feeling in her right arm ceased to exist.
Either a bot, or we finaly found Cookie thought the ZA as she collapsed to her knees clutching her shoulder.
END CHAPTER 16
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| Carnage |
Posted on 07/04/2012 02:24:33
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When do I get to kill Wings?
"Hey guys, I just bought this thing called a sight ward...so it's GG." - MasterA in League of Legends
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| FC Wings |
Posted on 07/04/2012 02:25:59
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Carnage wrote:
When do I get to kill Wings? After i kill you
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| ZA Luna |
Posted on 07/04/2012 02:31:20
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I got a big blue star for posting. i must be special
Posts: 1723
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After I save the day with nothing but a plasma pistol and a half of a graham cracker
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| Tulipness |
Posted on 07/04/2012 02:33:57
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Numpty
Posts: 1008
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wow good job phoenix!when done with all the chapters,we should privately publish the book for self keepings 
We are what we repeatedly do. Excellence then, is not an act, but a habit.
-Aristotle
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| samtheman32 |
Posted on 07/11/2012 19:27:59
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Thst was actually pretty damn good. |
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| ZA althor |
Posted on 07/11/2012 20:45:54
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Wanker
Posts: 794
Joined: 07.03.11
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you coulda just handed me a sniper and a few dozen rounds
*in the fine print definition of being server active* ....{FC}[ZA]Althor, will no longer be server active |
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| ZA BrickSquad |
Posted on 07/11/2012 21:44:58
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ShawnPeezy
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Wow you have a talent Phoenix! |
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| Phoenix |
Posted on 07/11/2012 22:21:21
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ShawnPeezy
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Thanks guys. Means a lot really. I'll try to get the next chapter up by this weekend.
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