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awaken me from my nightmare
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| SoD hobo |
Posted on 05/14/2011 00:59:35
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i made a little poem that is followin me life now, all from the top of meh head, i decided to make this after i finished reading "The Book Thief" which the end was sad and made me think, then today at skool some fat guy i hate wtih all the blood in my body punched me in the stomach and B_slapped my face (and he thinks he is hurting me when it feels like he is poking me) along with my sister making me rage with her obsessions. SO please be honest and tell me if i have talent:
Awaken Me From My Nightmare
I have fallen into a sleep
I just hate this god damn creep
They all make my blood boil
I buried them behind me in the soil
Im in this nightmare i cant awake
Please help me out for gods sake
I am losing my sanity at a fast pace
I will end others and my life if thats the case
If nobody helps me awake from this nightmare
people are going to wonder "who is that dead kid over there?"
I hate the voices ringing through my ears
Making me ignoring all my fears
Im ending this nightmare once and for all
If you try to talk to me, im not answering the call
I guess the nightmare is really bad
these people make me so sad
thats why ive ended this real life nightmare once and for all
its a bit long but ya 
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| Devase |
Posted on 05/14/2011 02:45:40
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I wish I hadn't read this as I recently and am still going through a rough time...
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/14/2011 12:58:48
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hobo you remind me of Sylvia Plath |
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| RazNinjaMike |
Posted on 05/14/2011 13:50:43
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good suicide poem. |
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/14/2011 15:00:23
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sarge be nice. he was telling us the reason he wrote that poem. if he didnt tell us that bit of info we wouldnt have known y he wrote that poem. i dont care if you dont like him. if you didnt want to hear it then dont read it. simple as that. dont come in all "woe is me i had to read a poem" get over it. if you dont want to read something on the site then dont but dont be a jerk about it |
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| SoD hobo |
Posted on 05/14/2011 15:01:48
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its not a suicide poem, its just a very sad/depressing and anger filled peom 
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/14/2011 15:06:43
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it sounds very suicidal |
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| SoD hobo |
Posted on 05/14/2011 15:10:08
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well i admit the last part is but thats cuz its pissin me off SOOO mcuh.... like you kno that feeling when you are either so sad or so mad that you wanna just like move away from everyone for a moment or something....
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/14/2011 15:51:10
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wow u remind me of holden from catcher in the rye |
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/14/2011 22:41:27
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oh my gosh sarge. leave him alone. people have different ways of dealing with things. i think hobo's poem is pretty good. just cuz u arent good at poetry dont mean u should bash him and make him feel bad for sharing what he is going thru with us. honestly get over it. if you didnt want to know this stuff DONT READ IT! ITS SO SIMPLE! |
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| Devase |
Posted on 05/14/2011 23:18:22
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Sarge, i agree with numpty. I been going through a rough time and i handled it very differently to alot of people because of wat i felt and my personality. so STFU and stop ripping on him. If you havn't got anything good to say then you shouldn't say anything at all.
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| SoD hobo |
Posted on 05/15/2011 00:37:59
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ZA numpty wrote:
oh my gosh sarge. leave him alone. people have different ways of dealing with things. i think hobo's poem is pretty good. just cuz u arent good at poetry dont mean u should bash him and make him feel bad for sharing what he is going thru with us. honestly get over it. if you didnt want to know this stuff DONT READ IT! ITS SO SIMPLE!
numpty......
that was.... *insert pause for dramatic effect*
BEAUTIFUL  
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| Devase |
Posted on 05/15/2011 02:13:25
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Well he wasn't really critising the poem, he was more or less having a go at hobo for reasons about writing the poem.
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/15/2011 11:57:51
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Shawn wrote:
Well actually Sarge is right. The reason Hobo put the poem was to get people's responces. If it's a negative responce then thats ok since we are all critics , you know what I'm saying. It's really hard to say ''dont read it'' when the poem is right there. And yeah its' really annoying to put such dark, depressing poems in hear. Id rather it be more cheerfull and energetic. Ill say what I feel about the poem though it might help people connect going through the same problems , but you dont really want to depress people around hear do you.
Sarge didn't criticize hobo's poem. He bashed hobo for sharing a poem with us. It is easy to say dont read it. all he has to do is open the thread, not read anything, and close the thread. ITS THAT EASY! Hobo was kind enough to share his talent with us and all you can do is bash it. How would you like it if you shared something personal with us and all we did was tell you u suck and you fail and crap like that? a lot of poems arent cheerful and energetic. |
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/15/2011 12:32:03
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ZA Sarge wrote:
ITS NOT ABOUT THE DAMN POEM! its about the fact that he is doing this to get attention! why cant you understand!? if he wanted help with his problem, he would make a serious thread about it. not make a freaking poem. and if you cant see it, then you are an idiiot.
WHOA NOW NO NEED FOR NAME CALLING. can you prove he is doin this just for attention? I think u just feel like being a dickhead towards hobo. he never said he wanted help with his problem he asked if he had a talent for poetry. If you didnt want to know about his problems you shouldnt have read it. its not a difficult concept. when are you going to get it through ur thick skull that there are other people here besides you. there is no need to bash me or hobo just cuz hobo is WAY better at writing poems than you and because I am sticking up for him. I understand you may not like hobo, I'm not a big fan of him either, but that is not a reason to complain at him just because ur a no-talent prick and he is good at writing poems. If you dont have anything nice to say about the matter then dont read the thread any more. |
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| ZA numpty |
Posted on 05/15/2011 13:06:28
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Dude, you are just bashing hobo for NO reason at all. When you get the proof that Hobo wrote this just for attention then I will stop defending him. Until then, no point you make is valid. I am thinking logically. You are thinking only one way. The way you see it is that hobo is a spamming noob who just wants attention. Unless you can prove your claim, nothing you say will be taken seriously. What are your reasons for saying he is doing this for attention? I am defending him because that is the right thing to do. You started with the name calling saying im ignorant and an idiot. I am thinking, how about you? You see this thread as a cry for attention. The only person defending what you are saying is Shawn... really you have the same mindset as Shawn? Your posts are all bashing. How about you try and be nice to people for a change instead of bashing them. You are the one being immature about this whole thing. I am sticking up for some one on the site. My asking for proof is very logical you are just saying that i have no valid points cuz YOU HAVE NO PROOF THAT HE IS DOING THIS FOR ATTENTION! So inorder to not make your self look bad you are bashing me for making good valid points. Come up with reasons why he is doing this for attention, prove your points then maybe ill agree with you. You are saying that my only defense is that im saying where is the proof but your only attack is that you claim hobo is doing this for attention. well, PROVE IT if you can. |
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| Devase |
Posted on 05/15/2011 13:29:32
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ok, guys. you know what I say?
SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
get over the drama and stop flinging the same stuff back and forth and actually take the time to read and look at it fro m the other persons view...
@Numpty, sarges point is valid upon an assumption and its got nothing to do with anyone being better than anyone with anything.
@Sarge, Numpty's point is valid upon an assumption and he has given evidence and you did kinda call him an idiot a few posts ago.
NOW STFU.
lol please dont get me in trouble xD
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| SoD hobo |
Posted on 05/15/2011 13:35:04
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i didnt mean to cause all this trouble, nor was i trying to get any attention, it just came to my mind and i have posted poems on the site before, well it was b4 i was site banned, actually before i was {FC}takis...
but it was in my sig....
also i used to post things about my life on facebook ^_^
but yea...
if you guys are going to keep fighting, can an admin please lock this? ill take the blame for all this chaos, nobody else is to blame but me since i started the thread.
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| Devase |
Posted on 05/15/2011 22:21:29
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Your a good man sarge.
Also i dont think u got my pm hobo. o.O
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| SoD hobo |
Posted on 05/15/2011 23:34:46
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it says i didnt get one 
send it again
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